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【标题】The Power of Small Actions
拿到题目先别慌,记住这个高分公式:内容完整+结构清晰+语言亮点+卷面干净。
一、内容对题(7-8分基础分必须拿到)
1. 要点齐全:题目让写啥就写啥,一个都别漏。比如让提建议,至少写两三条。
2. 立意明确:开头一句话点明主题,别绕弯子。结尾一句话总结或升华,简单有力。
二、结构清晰(用模板,不丢分)
总-分-总结构最保险:
第一段(总):开门见山。套句:`Nowadays, ... has become a hot topic. From my perspective, ...`
第二/三段(分):列理由或论据。用`Firstly, ... What's more, ... Last but not least, ...` 连接。
第三/四段(总):总结重申。套句:`In conclusion, I firmly believe that ... Only in this way can we ...`
三、语言出彩(冲高分关键)
1. 句式要骚:
倒装句:`Only in this way can we solve the problem.`
强调句:`It is small actions that make a big difference.`
虚拟语气:`If we had taken measures earlier, the situation would be better now.`
2. 词汇要装:
`important` → `crucial / vital / significant`
`many` → `a multitude of / numerous`
`show` → `demonstrate / reveal`
3. 衔接要顺:
转折用`However, / Nevertheless,`
递进用`Furthermore, / Moreover,`
举例用`Take ... as an example.`
四、卷面与检查
字可以不好看,但必须工整!
留2分钟检查。重点看:单复数、时态、主谓一致、拼写。
【高分心法】 审题画要点,下笔套结构,简单句保底,高级句冲分,写完数一数,要点全了没。