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首页/升学考试/2013安徽高考英语作文题目是什么,怎么写高分

就是“On the Way to School”,让你写篇短文,围绕“讲求文明,从我做起”这个主题扯。具体得写两件事:1.遵守交通法规;2.注意举止文明。词数120左右,题目已经给你了,写的时候不能暴露自己信息。

怎么写能拿高分

1. 结构直接套:开头点题,中间分两段对应题目两个要求,结尾总结呼吁,别搞花里胡哨的。中间段落可以用“First and foremost,… Moreover,…”这种词连起来。

2. 内容使劲编细节:别光说“要遵守交规”,写具体点。比如“我”看到红灯,即使没车也停下等;骑自行车不逆行、不戴耳机;过马路走斑马线还帮老人提东西。举止文明那块,可以写不乱扔垃圾、公交车上给孕妇让座、对同学老师主动问好。

3. 句式别太low:简单句基础上,掺几个定语从句(比如“The red light, which I always respect, reminds me of safety.”)、状语从句(“Only when everyone follows the rules can we have a better environment.”)。被动语态也用上,像“Traffic rules are made to protect us.”

4. 词儿换高级的:把“obey”换成“abide by”,“good”换成“civilized”或“decent”,“important”换成“crucial”或“essential”。开头别再用“With the development of society”了,直接“Nowadays, cultivating civilized behavior has become a social concern. As for me, it starts on my way to school.”

5. 卷面是命根:字可以不漂亮,但必须工整清晰,别涂改。段落分明,一行写到底难看得要死。

附一篇能照着学的范文(题目“On the Way to School”)

Nowadays, the call for social civilization is growing louder. As a student, I believe we should take the lead, and the journey to school offers a perfect starting point.

First and foremost, obeying traffic rules is fundamental for our safety and social order. I make it a habit to wait patiently at red lights even when no cars are in sight. Riding my bike, I keep to the right side and never wear earphones. What’s more, I always use the crosswalk and sometimes help the elderly cross the road. These actions not only protect me but also set a good example for others.

Moreover, civilized behavior on the way reflects our character. I never litter; instead, I put waste into the bin. On the crowded bus, I offer my seat to those in need, like pregnant women or the elderly. A friendly smile and a “good morning” to classmates and school guards can also brighten everyone’s day. These small gestures, taken together, make our community warmer and more pleasant.

In short, the way to school is not just a physical journey. It’s a daily practice of responsibility and kindness. Let’s all contribute to a more civilized society, starting from our very next step out of home.

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