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首页/升学考试/四川2012高考英语作文范文和评分标准

题目: 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom来信说他想了解中国的春节。请你给他回一封电子邮件,介绍春节并邀请他明年一起来过节。

范文(带标题):

An Invitation to Experience Chinese Spring Festival

Dear Tom,

I'm thrilled to hear that you're interested in our Spring Festival! It's the most important and festive holiday in China, usually falling in late January or early February.

The celebration lasts for about 15 days. Before it, families thoroughly clean their houses to sweep away bad luck. On New Year's Eve, we gather for a huge feast, enjoying dishes like dumplings, which symbolize wealth. We also stay up late to welcome the new year. The highlight is setting off fireworks and giving "red envelopes" (money in red paper) to children for good luck. People visit relatives and friends, exchanging greetings like “Happy New Year!”

The festival is all about family reunion, hope for prosperity, and joy. It would be fantastic if you could come next year to experience it firsthand! You'd love the lively atmosphere and delicious food.

Looking forward to your reply!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

高考英语作文评分标准(四川适用核心要点):

1. 内容要点分(关键): 必须覆盖题目所有要点。这篇范文要点:春节重要性、时间、清洁房屋、年夜饭/饺子、守岁、烟花/红包、拜年/祝福语、家庭团聚/寓意、发出邀请。漏要点直接扣分。

2. 结构逻辑分: 分段清晰(问候-介绍-邀请),逻辑连贯,使用连接词(like, also, before it, the highlight is)。

3. 语言质量分:

  • 词汇: 使用准确节日词汇(Spring Festival, fireworks, red envelopes, dumplings, family reunion)。
  • 语法: 句式正确(简单句、复合句混合),无重大语法错误。
  • 拼写/标点: 全篇无误。
  • 4. 流畅得体分: 全文流畅,符合电子邮件格式(称呼、结尾、署名),语气友好自然。

    拿分口诀:

    要点全,分段写,关键词用准,句子别出错,字数要够,卷面干净。邀请信格式:Dear XXX开头,Best wishes结尾。

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