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Ellie the elephant lived in a big, green jungle. She was a happy little elephant, but she was also very big and sometimes a bit clumsy. One sunny morning, Ellie was walking to the river. On her way, she saw her friend, Miko the monkey. Miko was trying to reach a bunch of juicy, yellow bananas high up in a tree. He jumped and jumped, but he was too small.
Hello, Miko!" said Ellie. "Can I help you?
Oh, yes, please, Ellie!" chattered Miko.
Ellie walked to the tree. She gently wrapped her long trunk around Miko and lifted him up, up, up to the bananas. "Thank you, Ellie!" said Miko happily, grabbing two big bananas. He gave one to Ellie.
Thank you!" said Ellie. They ate the sweet bananas together.
Then, Ellie continued to the river. She saw her other friend, Tilly the turtle. Tilly was trying to climb over a large, round stone to get to the water, but she was too slow and the stone was too smooth.
Hello, Tilly!" said Ellie. "Can I help you?
Oh, yes, please, Ellie!" said Tilly slowly.
Ellie put her strong forehead against the stone and gave a little push. The stone rolled away easily. "Thank you, Ellie!" said Tilly with a smile, and she slipped quickly into the cool water.
Finally, Ellie reached the river. She was about to drink some water when she heard a tiny, worried voice. It was Bella the bird. She was sitting on the riverbank, looking at her nest. The nest was on a low branch, but it was crooked and about to fall.
Hello, Bella!" said Ellie. "Can I help you?
Oh, yes, please, Ellie!" chirped Bella. "My nest is not safe for my eggs!
Ellie was very careful. She used the very tip of her trunk, which was very gentle, like a finger. She pushed the nest back onto the strong part of the branch and made it straight and secure. "Thank you, Ellie!" sang Bella. "You are so kind and clever!
Ellie drank from the river. She felt very happy. Even though she was big, she could use her size and her strong trunk to help all her friends. She learned that being different and big was not clumsy—it was wonderful and helpful. All the animals thought Ellie was the best friend in the whole jungle.