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The Mid-Autumn Festival, or Moon Festival, is my favorite Chinese holiday. It’s not just about the mooncakes, though I love the sweet bean paste and salted egg yolk ones. For me, it’s a special feeling that fills the air.
On that evening, my whole family gathers at my grandparents’ house. The table is always packed with food—pomelos, peanuts, and a big plate of mooncakes of all flavors. But the real star is the moon. After dinner, we carry chairs to the balcony. Grandma tells the old story of Chang’e, the lady who lives on the moon. I’ve heard it many times, but it never gets old. We look up at the bright, round moon. It looks like a huge, gentle lantern hanging in the dark sky, so clear you almost see the shadow of the mythical osmanthus tree.
My dad says the moon looks brightest and most beautiful on this night because it’s a night for togetherness. I think he’s right. My uncle works in another city, but he always comes back for this day. We chat, laugh, and share the mooncakes. Even when we’re quiet, just sitting together under the same moonlight, it feels warm and complete.
This year, my cousin brought a telescope. We took turns looking at the moon’s surface. It was full of craters and looked so different, so real. But when I stepped back and looked with just my eyes, it became that familiar, poetic moon again—the one that connects all of us looking at it, no matter where we are. That’s the magic of the Moon Festival. It uses a simple, round moon to remind us that home and family are the sweetest things in life, just like the center of a mooncake.